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Tuesday, March 28, 2006
Holocaust: The First Chapter
I am now sitting here in front of the computer instead of sitting in a chair at school, working on my project. Remember? The one that's been making me crazy? I have promised to myself that I will devote this day to finishing up this story, no matter what. Know what I've finished so far? The introduction, the beginning, the one that is supposed to be easy to write. Geez I didn't know writing a sort-of-novel story was this hard! No wonder it takes writers months and years to write their books. I'm fully satisfied with my introduction except I wrote another different introduction when I started writing and when I read it again, it was so beautiful. It's such a shame that Iwon't be able to use it in my story! That's what I get for not thinking of the whole story first before starting to write it. Hmm maybe I should post it here?
Oh and you might be wondering, "why is she not in school today?" That is because I've developed a nasty cough, the kind that makes you feel like throwing up whenever you have a series of coughs. It's not as bad as yesterday but at least there's one good thing coming out of it. I get to be absent today, which is very lucky and convenient for me since my Holocaust story is due tomorrow. I was thinking yesterday that if I was absent, that would mean I had a whole day to write my story which was fabulous! I woke up at 11 though so I lost a lot of hours to work. Nonetheless, I'm happy I still have the remaining hours to finish it. My mom and grandma were doubtful yesterday (more so my mom) that I would actually do it but ha! I'm sure proving them wrong. But writing sure is hard to do for a long period of time. Maybe I need a break.
Anyway, as a reward for whoever has endured reading all my rants about this project, I've decided to publish what I wrote do far- my first chapter. Please keep in mind that I'm not a professional writer and so what I have written cost me a lot of hard work and sweat, not to mention stress. Now without further ado, I present the first chapter of my Holocaust story.

Recollections:

Based on the real life story of Henny Adler

By Sonia Ann Marie dela Cruz

Chapter 1

Squeak! Squeak! The wooden rocking chair creaked with age as it swayed back and forth, although it wasn't nearly as old as the one sitting on it. A light breeze blew ever so slightly, rustling the leaves of the trees and bushes nearby. "Ahhh, this day is like bliss," the chair's occupant sighed.

Suddenly the screeching of a car and the blare of loud music interrupted the serene peace the day held. Birds squawked and flew away at the noise. A door was slammed and soon footsteps were heard, getting louder and louder until they finally stopped before the blue porch steps.

"Hey Grandma Henny! It's me, Jake," the 10- year- old brunette boy began. "Um, you see, Mom and Dad dropped me off to stay with you today. I hope it's okay," he said, uncertain. He hasn't really spent much time at all with his grandmother. She would always bake him yummy cookies though, and for that she had a special place in his heart.

He waited for a response from his granny but didn't receive any. Jake Adler dropped his backpack and sat beside the gray-haired elder, observing her quietly.

He thought to himself, "Whoa! Grandma has more wrinkles than the last time I saw her at our family reunion! I wonder if she's sleeping or just didn't hear me. I mean, old people do have bad hearing after all. Should I check?" Indeed, he did check.

"GRANDMA HENNY! WAKE UP!" Jake screamed as loudly as he could. She jumped out of her chair like a surprised cricket. An infuriated glare was then directed toward Jake and he sank back in his chair, a bit scared. That look quickly changed to one of surprise.

"Oh my! Is that you, Jake? What are you doing here on this beautiful day? I thought you were going to go to the beach," Henny said, puzzled.

He stared down at his shoes and bit his lip, looking like a sad little puppy. "I was supposed to! I put bubble gum in my sister's hair while she was asleep, though, when we had a fight so I'm punished for a month. I'm not allowed to go to our planned family trips. Even though I'm being punished, my sister still sends death glares toward me whenever she sees me." He looked at his grandmother, listening attentively with a kind smile on her face. He gave out a sigh.

"Everything is so beautiful and carefree here in your house. Only you and Grandpa live here now. It must be so peaceful living here. In fact, I think your childhood was very peaceful too."

Henny looked at her talkative grandson and laughed. Jake was surprised.

"I could only wish I had your problems back then as opposed to what I went through. Even school was a privilege that I couldn't have," she answered matter-of-factly.

Suddenly becoming curious, Jake asked her gently," Grandma, what was it like when you were a kid?"

"Very hard, Jake. It was very hard," she breathed. She began telling him her story, starting from what it was like to be an 8- year- old when Hitler came into power. The sun was high in the sky. A passing bird cooed, crossing the tranquil clear sky, reminding her of unforgettable memories during her childhood.

posted by Bubbles at 10:22 AM
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Sunday, March 26, 2006
Project Troubles
Currently I am writing a story on the Holocaust for a contest but geez I didn't know it woud be this hard! Argh it's driving me crazy because I don't know how to structure it. I was thinking of doing a flashback but would you put it in present or past tense? Which one would be easier for jumping across events? Also, I have to think of the beginnning and ending.

My original idea was to start in the present time, with my character, Henny, being a grandma. Then something reminds her of her experiences during the Holocaust and so that takes up most of my story. I was thinking of entwining her story with Sam Adler, who eventually became her husband and also had an amazing story to tell. I now realize that since I can't even think of how to do the flashback, entwining his story with hers would be infinitely harder. So anyway, then the end would be having her in the present time again. I wanted to make the reader learn a lesson through all this too.

Ack so basically I have to write an awesome butt-kicking story which holds the readers attention and make them learn something in only 3 days. Not to mention that I have a humongous amount of homework and other projects which I have to complete besides that! That would include a Sputnik report with 500-600 words by Monday and also rehearsing for a song number where I have to sing in Filipino(actually Tagalog) in front of a ton of people. Except I don't even know what song to sing yet! This is all so stressful... How in the world am I supposed to pull this off???

posted by Bubbles at 6:14 AM
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Tuesday, March 14, 2006
Poem For A Contest
(Written on Wednesday, September 07, 2005)

Hello hello! ito yung entry na ipapasok ko sa contest sa school. Please po pakisabi kung ano tingin nyo(no flames!) at yung interpretation nyo sa poem. Ang galing kasi bawat isang tao na pinabasa ko nito, iba yung interpretation nila sa nangyari sa poem. Kung sino yung speaker, ano yung naaalala niya,etc. Anway, here it is:


The Lone Lamplight



A lone lamplight shone,

In the quiet stillness of the air.

I come towards it,

And in awe I stare.



Coldness is all around,

Denying the world its treasures.

But there in that lamplight,

i see a bundle of pleasures.



In a flicker I see warmth,

A face smiling with glee.

In the glowing red I see love,

Love I wished enveloped me.



So I continue to stare,

Doe-eyed with wonder

At the glowing light

That makes me ponder.



And as the last snowflake falls,

I turn on my heel,

The flame has touched my soul,

Newfound hope it does reveal.



Now, the lone lamplight still shines

in the calm breezy air

And smiling, I look back

Knowing, it will always be there.



So yun. May makakakuha kaya ng meaning na inisip ko? Pero kahit na iba yung sinabi na interpretation ng reader, tama pa rin kasi ang poetry ay talagang sinadyang magkaroon ng iba't ibang meanings. Gets? Well, g2g. ttyl!!!

posted by Bubbles at 10:55 PM
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